▶ Your Answer :
It
is evident that in our current society how to spend free time has a tremendous
importance in our lives. Some people think that lesure industry will be
amplified while others do not. I however, believe that people will have more
time for leisure activities in the future. There are several reasons that I
could discuss to support my argument so I will limit my discussion to the two
that I feel are the most relevant to the topic. First, more leisure activities
will appear. Also, automatic machines will replace human industry area.
First,
a lot of new activities will be created. Development of techonology shows us
new world. A lot of new leisure activity appeared. It was possible because there
were a lot of new techonology. For example, people could not enjoy variety of
activities which are now common such as paragliding, and skinscoober. Invention
of how to fly, breath in water made these activities possible. These days,
development of techonology looks like more faster than past. So, it will make a
lot of new field of leisure.
Second,
the time which people spend for their work will be decreased. Now a days, we
use a lot of computer program when we work. Some of the fields are even
replaced by robot. These phenomenon will create remaining time to people. For
example, according to survey conducted by Seoul National University, it is
revealed that the time we work for our task was decreased. Professor Kim, who
conducted this suverey said that by using computer program effiency of work was
increased surprinsingly. He argued that the average time per week which we work
decreased 70hours to 55hours during 15 years. In addition he mentioned that the
reduction of work time will be fasted as time goes on.
For
these reasons I agree with the topic sentence. I think people will spend more
time on leisure. |