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As the companys are growing faster ever than before, a controversy has arisen over whether building large factories is helpful to people or not. In my opinion, if a company announce that it wants to build a large factory near my community, I strongly would oppose it. This is because building factories damages the local environment and ruins to the locals' lives. To start with, I strongly disagree that buildig factories near my town. This is due to the fact that it makes the environment ravaged. This is evident by a lot of reports that cleary show that factories are harmful not only to the local wildlife but alos to locals. That is, People will cut a countless number of trees to construct factories and so, many wild animals will lose their habitat. Deforestration will change the land into barren where land slides and floods frequently occur. Moreover, toxic wastes and smokes from factories cause air pollution and make people sick. In addition, factories do not help to improve people's life. Some people argue that if a big and famous factory comes in their town, it will create jobs and benefit economially to the town. However, the disadvantages of building a factory far outweigh the advantages. For example, locals have to endure the construction for a long time. This is because building factories requires a lot of time to complete them. As a result, people in community need to stand a variety of annoy things. That is, they cannot enjoy natural view because of the construction. Or students will have difficulty focusing on studying due to noise from construction. As a result, it makes locals feel incomfortable and some people who cannot bear it maybe move out. In conclusion, I firmly believe that building a factory near my town is not beneficial at all. This is because it makes the environment devastate and also, it has negative effets on people's life. If a factory come in our community, it would be wise for locals to think about the results to the environmen and their lives.
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