Agreee of Disagree- Carefully planned free time |
Some people might argue that people should spend their free time without any specific plans and doing so they can have relaxation and alleviate stress caused by their strenuous work. However, I strongly believe that what people think recklessly causes both a waste of time and a lack of fulfillment after a certain period of time.
First of all, most people can learn valuable faculties by planning their activities systematically. To illustrate this ,last year I decided to learn jazz dance because my work finished at 6 o’clock punctually ,so I enrolled a 6 month of an an evening dance class in lieu of going to one of the clubs with my colleagues in downtown where you can find a place to go dancing every night. After completing the course, I enrolled another dance class which was targeted to future wannabe dance teachess. It rendered me a certificate to be a dance instructor. What I initially planned was to have a new hobby without a high expectation, but eventually I got the valuable qualification by planning my spare time in an organized way.
Moreover, people can save money by focusing on an activity-which is also a crucial point to live in a modern world. Some people just waste their money in vain doing temporarily prevalent activities that their peers seem to enjoy .After one or two tries, they give up and take up a new hobby or activity which intrigue them at that moment again. This kind of behaviour cycles over and over again resulting a mere amount money left in their bank accounts.
To sum up. people should plan their precious free time, which is actually hard to attain much in this frantic society, cautiously not to be wasted and ensure that present hobby can be your future vocation so that people should be learning with much enthusiasm within a step-by-step schedule.
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