Young people enjoy life more than older people. |
A Korean old saying says “The sound mind can be in the healthy body.” As you can know from the old saying, some people believe that young people can enjoy life more than older people. Other people say, however, the old can also have joyful life. In my personal opinion, the young, especially adolescents, have more exciting days because they have a far more healthy bodies and less stress. First of all, young people’s healthy bodies allow them to have more exciting activities. It is possible for them to enjoy a lot of energetic activities such as doing sports games, going abroad for travels and swimming in the sea. That is, unless you are not healthy that much, it is hard to enjoy your life with something active. For example, I was a member of a regional football team when I was a freshman in a university. In the team, there were a few old people whose ages were nearly same with my parents’. Even though they were in the team for a decade and really like playing football game, their ages were some obstacles. On top of that, burdensome days prevent older people from enjoying their life. To explain this concept, they have many things that they have to concern about such as assuming responsibilities for their positions in work places, making money for their family and even taking a look at their friends’ numerous affairs. The Experts have verified that men whose ages are between forty and fifty tend to have more stressful life than younger people. Because they have to take their various social roles, unrelieved stress often let them suicide. In conclusion, the younger people are, the more they can enjoy their life. Not only can the young have advantages from their physical health, but they can live with less burdensome works. All in all, people should enjoy their life when they are young, considering that they may not be able to do that after being the old.
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