With the a growing number of companies around the globe, more and more workplaces are being made that requiring good team work(붙임). Therefore, the majority of companies try to recruit those the employees who can work well in teams. However, some disagree with this "policy" by stating that the merit of working alone is far greater than that of working in a group. Given the options, I have a preference for working in a team for a number of reasons. First of all, this makes the work much more fun and easy. In addition, team work can enhance one's social skills. 본문에 들어갈 내용이기도 하고 이미 들어가 있네요.
To begin with, the existence of co-workers around itself can motivate a person to enjoy performing a task. This, in turn, makes the work much easier and more exciting. In contrast, when a person works alone, he tends to find work much more boring, thereby not allowing him not to enjoy the process of working. he is likely to be bored by a work.
To illustrate, when I study with my friends doing various other tasks, I cannot notice time flying by.
I cannot keep track of time. / I cannot recognize how quickly time has passed.
Not only does it not allow me not to think about anything else, but also friends help me deal with some difficulties I may face while performing the tasks. As seen from this example, the process of working together with other people can be very exciting.
What is more, by participating in a group work, a person can acquire fundamental skills for him to cope with others the rest of the society. Today, when social skills are more important than ever before, working in a team can teach people valuable lessons about enhancing those skills. By performing a task together, a person can enhance his/her interpersonal relationship with the others. Specialists (in the this field) also agree that a person who can fit to working together with co-workers have more chances to succeed than those who prefer to work alone.
To sum up, I would like to reiterate that working in a team has far more advantages than working alone. The rationale behind this is that team work improves one's interpersonal relationship and makes the working process much more exciting. |