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Some people may believe that students learn effectively when they study alone. However, students should study with group members to learn more fruitfully about what they are studying. In this essay, i will insist my opinion with two ideas. First, by obtaining member’s opinions and materials, students learn more effectively. Second, studying in a group prevents from students to limit from limiting their way of thinking.
To begin with, students understand more apparently about a subject by sharing ideas and discussing a topic with other people. Since, various opinions enable students to understand well what they are learning about. Also, students are able to understand a topic more precisely when they get new materials from group members. In my case, when i studied TOEFL with other people, i believed that the group study would not that much helpful to me. However, while studying with group members, my grade has been increased. This is because, i could learn various views from study members to solve in solving problems.
In addition, studying alone has negative effects on students’ grades. Since, if students study alone, they cannot develope the way of flexible thinking. Putting it differently, students might restrict their thoughts while they study alone(that are needed to study). According to the survey conducted by Tokyo University, 93% of responders answered that when they study without other's helps, their grade was keep decreased due to the limitation of thinking. Even one of the responders said that people should not study alone and when there are friends to get together, they should make a group study so that broaden their way of thinking.
In a nutshell, studying with group members is more fruitful in an aspect of education. As i mentioned above, students can understand parts which they do not know from other members, by sharing ideas and materials. Also, when students study with members, they can broaden their way of thinking and improve their marks.
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