■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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▶ Your Answer :
It is often said that higher education should be available only to good students. Some people may be oppose that statement. I absolutely disagree with that statement, too. In a rapidly changing world, it is up to individual about their personal grade and how to accept the information well. Here are some reason why I do think like that.
To begin with, the opportunity to receive higher education for only good grade students, it wil be excaerbate the gap between good students and not good ones. Furthermore, the studnets given bad grades are able to lose their confidence because of feeling inferior studnets themselves. From my exeperience, when I was a high scool student, there was a system to dived the English class into a superb and lower class. At first, it seems more reasonable for the students who have eager to learn. However, after closer inspection, it is not. Higher classes have more burden them down and under more depression because of heavy loads of scool works. In the other hand, lower classes make the studnets who desire to study distract from noise. This viciouse circle worsen the both classes atmosphere.
Also, teaching to students eaqually gives a chance to favorable compettion and benefits from each other. The difference of each grades should be estimated by how to pour their effort. The learning process is up to individual in the end. It will be enhance their study skills sharing the superior stuents and get spur to study to its fullest understand. The good sutdnets get more confident and may have interested in stduying to teach their friedns. In the end, it is more beneficial both of them.
To summurize, I definetely disgree with higher education should be available only to good students. That oranization is not fair. All of the students have right to learn eaqual even though they have poor capacity at catch up their school work. The problem is personal endeavnor after all. | |
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