In the modern day, many people are consider television as disrupting communication among friends and family. However, I’ m I disagree with this opinion. Even though, cause problems may rise due to by watching television too much such as increasing population of lazy people (potato couch 는 조금 informal language 이라서 맞는 표현이지만potato couch person. This is due to this fact people stop interacting in social events that watching television provides people who have little chance to meet with opportunity of meeting and television gives a lot of interesting information to them that have a positive influence on communicating well.(sentence가 너무기네요 또 기러서인지 내용이 왔다갔다해서 잘 이해하기 힘드네요.ㅠ 어쩐땐 간단하고 심플한것도 좋은듯해요)
To start with, Television has been the most important media in point of that giving communicating place easier to us in present day(??). In other words, people have little opportunity to communicate among friend and family due to a number of time problems caused by modern society such as burdensome task at workplace, school and private institute school and if they have enough time to communicating, place which people can gathering together is rare(지금 이 초록색 부분이 다 한 sentence 인데 너무 기네요. 이해하기두 힘들구요 ㅠ). However, television furnishes us with proper place that is easy for gathering among family and friends. To illustrate this point is my family. My home is a double-income family and I’m a full-time student. For these reasons, we have little chance to meet but we always talk about our experience from the office and school and exchange advice while watching television.
Also, television affords a range of interesting information from entertainment to educational things such as marriage of stars, elect president election. Generally speaking, televisions provide us with various materials to say that enable us to continue conversation with enjoying. It is evident by a several (a는 한 개 several 은 여러 개 요)studies that clearly shown that people’ mainly topic of communication when they congregate at same place in ordinary day is being broad-cast materials especially among young people.
To summarize, it is obvious that television plays a pivotal role in communicating well among friend and family despite of caused problems by television. In short, the advantages of watching television is far outweighs its disadvantages.