■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :
Do you agree or disagree with following statement?
People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your opinion. | |
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Today, many people care about the appearances and their clothes. In this situation, clothes become the symbol of the people. People can represent them with their own fashion and by following the trends. I think recent people behave differently when they wear different clothes because they can be more active when they wear their favorite clothes and get self confidence. Also, I think people's minds follow the clothes. They need to be more careful when they wear skirts to look more pretty or wear black suit for strictly place.
First of all, people usually have confidence when they wear the favorite clothes. In contrast, people become negative when they wear dirty and not good clothes. In society, many people decide a person with the appearance and clothes. If he or she wears good and expensive clothes, many people think he or she is very good and rich person and try to be familiar. Because of those actions, many people become active with good clothes. In my case, when I was in elementary school, I had no idea on trend. One day, I felt not good and became negative. When I saw a mirror, I realized that I wore unbalanced and look more ugly. After that, I care about the fashion. I think clothes have ability to control people's minds.
Secondly, people behave differently with different clothes because of the place. In funeral place, almost all people wear black clothes and become silent. In this situation, although a person's mind is always active and noisy, he or she acts more careful. Of course, this action is from the place, I think clothes also influence the way people behave. Black makes them more silent and this is why most people wear black suit in funeral place. Also, especially women need to be more careful when they wear skirts. They should be careful and they will. I'm sure that these actions are from the clothes.
Finally, I think clothes influence the attitudes of people because clothes represent the moods with color and also help to get confidence. For these reasons, I agree with the statement that clothes influence the way people behave. | |
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