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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :You need to travel from your home to a place 40 miles away. compare the different kinds of transprtation you could use. Tell which method of travel you would choose. Give specific reasons for your choice. | |
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Traveling always excite me. In my opinion, If I travel from my home to a place 40 miles away, I'll take a train. To illustrate why I convince my point, I treat only a few significant reasons with my vivid experiences here.
To begin with, if I take a train, I can see beatiful views over the windows. When I drive my car, I have to concentrate on driving, so I can't see great views in detail. For example, when i went to the beach with my friends, I drove. some of my friedns began to fell asleep, some see awesome views over the windows. I also wanted to see them, but I couldn't see them because of driving. I was so upset. After that, when my friend suggests to travel, I always tell him that we can enjoy together on the train.
Furthermore When I take a train, I can feel alive. There are a lot of people in the train, From children to old men. They go to destination to have each aim. Even though each aim is different, we go together to destination in the same place. A crying baby, people who read a book, old women and so on. They are a part of the world. I think I can feel alive because of them. Therefore, I like to travel to take a train.
In conclusion, If I travel somewhere, I'll take a train. The reason why I think like this is because not only I can see beatiful views over the windows but I also can feel alive as taking a train. | |
Traveling always excites me. In my opinion, if I travel from my home to a place 40 miles away, I'll take a train. To illustrate why I convince my point, I treat only a few significant reasons with my vivid experiences here.
To begin with, if I take a train, I can see beatiful beautiful views over the windows. When I drive my car, I have to concentrate on driving, so I can't see great views in detail. For example, when I went to the beach with my friends, I drove some of my friedns friends and they began to fell asleep, some see awesome views over just watched the view over the windows. I also wanted to see them, but I couldn't see them because of I was driving. I was so upset. After that, when my friend suggests to travel, I always tell him that we can enjoy together on the train.
Furthermore when I take a train, I can feel alive. There are a lot of people in the train, from children to old men. They go to certain destinations to have each aim. Even though each aim is different, we go together to destination in the same place. A crying baby, people who read a book, old women and so on. They are a part of the world. I think I can feel alive because of them. Therefore, I like to travel to take by a train.
In conclusion, if I travel somewhere, I'll take a train. The reason why I think like this is because not only I can see beatiful the beautiful view over the windows but I also can feel alive as by taking a train.