▶ Your Answer : The lecturer argues against the article's point that the wave farms are advantageous. (To whom?) The lecturer argues that the advantages of wave farms are just an illusion. She argues against the reading passage her perspective using three different arguments.
First of all, the lecturer argues that disruptions in power generation occurs because of technological issues. Wave farms use new technologies in harsh marine environments, therefore, the amount of power generated tends to fluctuate quickly. (Why's that?) This directly opposes the article's point that wave farms are an incredible source of power generators, therefore, it is possible to accurately predict the generation capacity of the wave farms.
Another point the lecturer makes is that the assertion made by the article that wave farms do not cause any environmental damages are dismissive. She argues that the floating convertors contain harmful chemicals that can damage the ocean ecosystems. This point directly does against the point made in the article that wave farms are proven to be environmentally friendly. In contrast to the point made in the article that the floating convertors use the movement of waves to turn their turbines, the lecturer firmly argues that there are a lot of chemical lubricants that help the turbine to move, therefore, the substances that come out from these lubricants are extremely toxic, and can affect the ocean ecosystem.
Lastly, the lecturer challenges the article by saying that wave farms can negatively impact the surrounding scenery sceneries. The floating convertors are visible as they are painted in bright colors, therefore, if they are close to the shore, they can be easily noticed by tourists. (Mention more negative impacts on scenery) This refutes the article's point that wave farms do not have negative impacts on the natural beauty of the surrounding landscapes.
In conclusion, with these three main points, the lecturer strongly disagrees with the points made in the article.
채점기준표 | Grammar | Contents | Example | Coherence | 점수 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | Score | Fair 18-23 |
- power의 양이 fluctuate 하는 이유는 무엇인가요?
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