There has been an ongoing debate over whether or not young children spend a great amount of their time studying. Many people, perhaps most of them, are against this stance that young students should spend a great amount of their time playing sports. However, others may assume that children have to study rather than do/play sports activities. I agree with the latter position.
First of all, 여기에 토픽을 써주세요 ~ 바로 이야기 들어가기 보단. First of all, since people learn more efficiently when they are young, they should spend their time studying rather than playing sports. The early education is very important in that children' personality, interest and characteristic can form. For example, When I was 13-year-old 이렇게 쓸땐 13살짜리 아이란 뜻이 되구요, 내가 13살이었을때=When I was 13 years old,), I always read books about history and I usually studied about great figures. So, I became a historian. It shown that what to do spending time is very important for future. And, Korea society is fastly developing all aspects. Therefore, we have to study rather than sports when we are young. 어릴때는 공부를 더 효율적으로 한다(기억에 더 오래남는다)는 arguement로 나가는게 좋을 것 같아요. 여기선 딱히 포인트가 없는 것 같아요. 무조건 공부잘하는게 좋다는 전제하에 쓰여진 듯한? 그런 느낌이에요. 예를 들면 어릴 때 한게 바로 직업으로 이어지면 농구를 해서 농구선수가 되는게 나쁠 이유는 없잖아요 ~ 더 힘있게 써주세요 !
But, even the assumption above is very plausible who disapprove my idea may argue that young students have to exercise rather than studying. They think that young children are growing physical.
So, If students want to grow , they have to exercise basketball and running. All exercises are helpful to growing children. I totally concede this. Yet, I still an emphasis on my idea because there is one more important matter to consider.
If students spend their time only exercising, they are not likely to success in Korea society. Because Korea society is very important about a person's study scores. So, when they select their work that they do not acquire good working places. And, students only do exercise, they are able to realize their faults about they do not study when they were young. In a recent study by Korea job association , students who do not study when they are childhood do not have a good working place.
To sum up, thought everyone may hold a different position on this issue, I am in favor of the idea that young children have to study rather than exercising. |