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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit | |
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Numerous companies generally use any methods which can optimize their profits. However, businesses should not do anything to make a profit because some of the profitable methods are harmful in a number of ways.
To begin with, utilizing children workforce might be one of the best ways to maximize a company's profits because they get paid less and have relatively smaller physical complex than normal adults. However, this is highly dangerous for children since they might not be mature enough to take care of themselves in factories, which are usually risky. For example, in 19th century, many textile factories hired young children because their small fingers and hands were able to reach into machinery. As a result, companies' profits went up; however, a plenty of children were killed or were seriously injured, for example amputation. Textile companies in 19th century sure remarkably increased their profits, but they took many precious future leaders' lives, children's lives.
Furthermore, one of the most lucrative but dangerous ways to optimize a company's profits is causing wars, which could endanger human race. If all human beings die due to many companies' attempts to make much money, what is the point of earning a huge sum of money? when There is nobody to expend money. As it is, a number of companies earned a huge amount of money by selling nuclear, biological, and chemical weapons. For example, some countries indeed indirectly encourage some countries to have a war in order to sell weapons. In that way, they can enhance their financial status. However, numerous people’s lives are victimized.
Companies should not use any method that can increase their profits as some of the useful ways could be dangerous and harmful to people. Therefore, I am against the idea which states that companies should do anything in order to maximize their profits. | |
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