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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : The news media is a reliable source of unbiased information.Do you agree or disagree with statement?
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Today we can keep up with incidents happening all over the world in touch with news through various medias.
-keep in touch하면 연락하다고, 뉴스 등을 계속 알고 있다 는 keep up with로 써주세요 ^^
There are lots of is a major controversy whether the news media provides with credible and accurate information(단수) informations or not. Although the many news from TV programs,internet and newspaper pretend to be accurate and honest,I recognize the exaggeration and dishonesty. Although the news from the media looks accurate and honest, it is actually full of exaggeration and dishonesty. Therefore I disagree with the topic that the news media is a reliable source of unbiased information with for the following reasons.
To begin with, many news media is related to the stakeholders. Major corporations are likely to rig manipulate the news in favor of them by paying the money to reporters.This can be explained comprehensively if we take the example of by the war between United State of America and Iraq.It was really cruel and fierce The war between them was really cruel and fierce. The purpose of America was to occupy the territory of iraq where the fuel exists but they fabricated the news in such a way that they could start started the war to make claiming to make world peaceful.This event shows that news media is not honest but manipulated. and rigged.
Moreover, news media tries to make news more attractive and dramatic.This is chiefly because it wants to inveigle more viewers so that it can make a huge profit.They design the news with the sensationalized contents so that it will hold the attention towards many readers.
This exercise of exaggeration of news really harm the readers that they are informed wrong.For example, such as when Swine Flu was emerged ,
The news media informed that the world is going to be end.
This news became worldwide and people all over the world believed that human beings will be extinct and new species will appear be appeared. This was really shoking and cruel news but it was exaggerated, far from being truthful. Finally people found the medical treatment for it =>> 치료법을 찾았다기보단 간단한 치료로 나을 수 있는데 뉴스가 과장했다고 마무리하면 더 좋겠네요 ^^ and now no one is suffering from it.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the news media is not reliable because it is related to the stakeholders who make the news in favor of them and the exaggeration and designin the news more attractive by reports to make a numerous porfit.For this sense, we ought to consider the news whether it is true or not and should not misunderstand easily. | |
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