In order to make my community more attractive to people such as my age, high teenagers, my community (it) should build more coffee shops. This is because the coffee shops could provide a place for high school students to associate with their friends. Furthermore, the coffee shops could provide a source of employment for high school students like me.
To begin with, high school students like me enjoy associating with their friends at coffee shops. Therefore, Building more coffee shops would attract more high teenagers to my hometown. In my hometown, there are not many coffee shops but a plenty of drinking bars which are not suitable for teens people my age. Thus, in order to socialize with friends, high school peers need to go out of the town which might be time-consuming and uncomfortable. Some people might say "Why don't high school students socialize at home?" However, it might not be easy to associate (=make relationships)with friends at home because in my country, Korea, many parents always tell high school students to study for an university. Therefore, Thus students in high school need a place, coffee shop, where they can be without their parents in order to socialize and release their accumulated stress.
Furthermore, the coffee shops might provide a job( source of employment) for high school students like me. My town is filled with inappropriate places that are inappropriate for high school students to work, for example, drinking bars or night clubs. High school students might need extra money to satisfy their needs, for example like buying cosmetics or going to Karaoke for entertainment. However, Korean parents would not even give a single dime to their children if their children ask money to go to Karaoke. Therefore, if my town constructs more coffee places, the high school students would be appealed by the source of employment because they can earn money.
Building cafes might offer places for the high school students to socialize and might provide the opportunity for students to work. Therefore, my town should build more coffee places in order to attract more high school students like me. |