■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : 컴퓨터를 사는 것이 좋은가? 아니면 도서관의 책들을 사는 것이 좋은가? | |
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As many schools are trying to offer better education for students, there are two ways; purchasing computers or books for the library. Some people will argue that buying books is more efficient and educational ways for learners because it promote student to study hard by researching their work. However, from my point of view, to purchase computers for students is better option for several reasons.
To begin with, since they use the Internet from computers, its knowledge outweigh books' ones. That's because the Internet has all of the information in the world. Also, the Internet connects other schools for sharing information. For example, when my brother was attending a high school, the administration of the school built computer labs for the students. Then, he could find many resources regarding his literature project. When he used library, he sometimes couldn't find some details. To research them, he used computers which comprised more information than books.
On top of that, using computers is more convenient for students and a school. To be specific, if the school use library, they have to manage all the books and check the missing ones. However, controlling computer lab is easy for them. Moreover, student can use the Internet faster than reading materials by once a click mouse. They have to find categories for researching specific part of their study, when they go to library. Nevertheless, there are many searching sites in the Internet, so students can type the information what they need and copy it. How convenient is!
In conclusion, I strongly believe that purchasing computers is better for students and a school. The reasons are that the Internet has more knowledge than books and using computer is more comfortable. If people consider cost of many computers, they don't have to worry about it, because they can buy group on sale. Nowadays computers aren't expensive very much. I recommend installing the computers in many schools for students' education. | |
제가 이렇게 라이팅 준비할 수 있는 것도 주님의 은혜입니다/.
제가 쓴 것은 제가 아닌 주님께서 하신 것입니다.