> > 2010-07-08 17:27:52, '' 님이 쓰신 글입니다. ↓
아웃라인을 잡는 것이 쉽지 않네요. '텔레비젼의 목적이 엔터테인이 아니라 교육이 되어야 한다.' 라는 것에 반대한다면, 엔터테인적인 요소도 이로운 부분이 있음을 보이면 된다고 생각했는데, 접근 방식이 맞는지 모르겠네요. 결국 글은 마치 엔터테인적인 요소가 목적이 되야하는 것처럼 쓰여진 것 같습니다. ㅠ.ㅠ (아이디어도 정말 떠오르지 않구요;;)
■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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The purpose of television should be not to entertain people but to educate them. Agree or disagree? | |
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It is often said that the purpose of television should not be to entertain people but to educate them. Some people might agree with this idea in that watching television is time-consuming. So, in order to save and use our time, the television should intend to educate people. However, I disagree with this stance and present my reasons below.
To begin with, a television plays a crucial role in refreshing our bodies and mind. After finishing works, we are usually exhausted and stressed out. However, remedies are quite restricted because we have to start our routine life again tomorrow. It is difficult to try outdoor activities since it makes people more burdened. In this sense, a television is effective method to relax and relieve our stress because there are many interesting programs, such as soap-operas, talk shows or movies. People are able to reduce stress by enjoying them in their convenience home.
But even the above is plausible, some may argue that if the purpose of television is to entertain people, watching television is very time wasting activity because, it is not more than the method making us comfortable for a moment. Yet, I still put an emphasis on my idea because there is one more important matter to consider.
A television contributes to enhancing a family bond. This is because it is naturally conceivable that all family members get together after dinner and they watch television talking with other members. Since each member has own distinct routine life, it is difficult to spare time for talking about something which is very important to strengthen a family bond. Entertaining TV programs provide comfortable atmosphere, so that family members can have a talk about something easily and naturally.
To sum up, everyone may hold a different position on this issue. Yet, all things considered, I firmly believe that the entertaining purpose of television is beneficial to us. This is because, by watching television, we can refresh ourselves and make a family bond solidified. | |
It is often said that the purpose of television should not be to entertain people but to educate them. Some people might agree with this idea in that watching television is time-consuming. So, in order to save and use our time, the television should intend to educate people. However, I disagree with this stance and present my reasons below.
To begin with, a television plays a crucial role in refreshing our bodies and mind. After finishing work, we are usually exhausted and stressed out. However, remedies are quite restricted because we have to start our routine life again tomorrow. It is difficult to try outdoor activities since it makes people more burdened. In this sense, a the television is an effective method to relax and relieve our stress because there are many interesting programs, such as soap-operas, talk shows or movies. People are able to reduce stress by enjoying them in their convenient home.
But even if the above reasons are is plausible, some may argue that if the purpose of television is to entertain people, watching television is a very time wasting activity because, it is not more than the method making us comfortable for a moment. Yet, I still put an emphasis on my idea because there is one more important matter to consider.
Televisions contribute to enhancing family bond. This is because it is naturally conceivable that all family members get together after dinner and they watch television talking with other members. Since each member has their own distinct routine life, it is difficult to spare time for talking about something which is very important to strengthen a family bond. Entertaining TV programs provide comfortable atmosphere, so that family members can have a talk about something easily and naturally.
To sum up, everyone may hold a different position on this issue. Yet, all things considered, I firmly believe that the entertaining purpose of television is beneficial to us. This is because, by watching television, we can refresh ourselves and make solidify family bonds solidified.