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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :All university students should be required to take at least one class that teaches the culture of a foreign country. | |
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It is said that it is mandatory that all students in university take at least one class of the foreign culture. Although some people may disagree with the statements, I firmly believe that advantages of taking the foreign culture class is more important. There are several reasons, but two of the most important ones are as follows.
Most of all, after graduate, students can get a job with the knowledge from their class of foreign culture. Today in this global world, people go to other countries freely and they request help from people who are aware of the foreign cultures. If students had learned a lot of things such as food, weather, and languages, they would be able to give a lot of help for travels. For example, when I was in the college, I and my friends took a french culture class together. He was glad to learn the french language, food, and arts. After he graduate the college, he could get a job in a travel company with high salary. The most significant point was his knowledge and information about french. Therefore, taking the foreign class will provide students with a big advantage for a job in the future.
In addition, students can have diverse views with the class dealing with the foreign culture. We are apt to think other culture on our shoes and try to stick the one views to see the broad world. However, if student learn about different culture in their college, they could think about this world differently. According to a study of Seoul national University in Korea in 2009, the study shows that more than 50% student was more flexible to understand other culture and could be adapt to different society in other countries. The biggest reason was that they took a foreign language and culture classes while they were in their college. Thus, by taking the foreign culture class, student would be able to have a ability to understand other cultures and look at the culture on their shoes.
In conclusion. I strongly support that call universities should require students to take at least one class to learn the foreign culture. If they do so, they will have more student who have a broad view that is pivotal useful skills in this global society. Additionally, the classes will help students to get a job after graduate.
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It is said that it is mandatory that all students in university take at least one class of the about foreign culture. Although some people may disagree with this statement, I firmly believe that advantages of taking the foreign culture class are more important. There are several reasons, but two of the most important ones are as follows.
Most of all, after students graduate, students they can get a job with the knowledge from their class of foreign culture. Today in this global world, people go to other countries freely and they request help from people who are aware of the foreign cultures. If students had learned a lot of things information (thing도 틀린 표현은 아니지만 TOEFL essay 를 쓸때에는 so 나 things, stuff 과 같은 informal 한 단어보단 다른단어를 쓰는게 더 좋은 것 같아요~) such as food, weather, and languages, they would be able to give a lot of help to tourists (when they travel 어떤거 말씀하시) for travels. For example, when I was in the college, I me and my friends took a French culture class together. He was glad to learn the French language, food, and arts. After he graduated the college, he could get got a job in a travel company with high salary. The most significant point was his knowledge and information about French (France). Therefore, taking the foreign class will provide students with a big advantage for a job in the future.
In addition, students can have diverse views with the class dealing with the foreign culture. We are apt to think about other cultures on in our shoes and try to stick the one view to see the broad world. However, if a student learns about different cultures in his or her college, they could think about this world differently. According to a study of from Seoul national University in Korea in 2009, the study shows that more than 50% of student was were more flexible to understand other culture and could be adapt to different societies in other countries. The biggest reason was that they took a foreign language and culture class while they were in their college.
Thus, by taking the foreign culture class, students would be able to have the ability to understand other cultures and look at the culture in their shoes.
In conclusion, I strongly support that call universities should require students to take at least one class to learn the about foreign cultures. If they do so, they will have more students who have a broad view that is pivotal useful skills in this global society. Additionally, the classes will help students to get a job after they graduate.
p.s from bj: 저 작년에 토플봤을 때 이 질문 나왔는데~^^