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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Pets should be treated like family members. | |
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In general, many people have pets for their taste or fashion. Hence, people are satisfied by decorating their pets. Some people say that pet is own thing for their satisfaction. However, in my point of view, pets should be treated like family members.
To begin with, pets have their emotion and comprehension. Much people known that many animals have their own languages and they can learn some specific situations. When I served in military, my position was military police, so I had known many military dogs. For instance, if I commend them to bite something, they follow my order. Of course, this situation can be by training. Moreover, sometimes they can understand other people’s emotions such as hate or like. If some person hates them, they avoid that person. This example shows that pets can feel other people’s emotions and languages, so they are respected other people.
Second, people can be solved their emotional stresses like loneliness by pets. In the modern society, married age is later than past, and they are felt lone emotion by living alone longer time. For example, I lived alone for 10 years, so I sometimes thought that I was loneliness. One day, when I bought cat for solve my emotion stress, I had to take care of my cat, and my pet followed me as well. I spent lots of my free time with cat, and I could forget negative emotions like I was loneliness. This example shows that people can forget negative thinking such as loneliness and sadness when people are with pets.
In brief, pets can be understood other people thinking or their emotions by their facial appearance or behaviour, and people can be solved their negative emotional stresses through to support their pets. Finally, I strongly believe that people should respect their pets like family members.
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In general, many people have pets for their taste or fashion (틀린 표현은 아니지만 애완동물을 얘기할 때는 100퍼 적합한 표현은 아닙니다) Hence, people are satisfied by decorating their pets. Some people say that pets are is own thing for their satisfaction. However, in my point of view, pets should be treated like family members.
To begin with, pets have their emotion and comprehension. Much people known that many animals have their own languages and they can learn some specific situations. When I served in the military, my position was a military police, so I had known many military dogs. For instance, if I commend (command를 말씀하시고 싶으신거죠? Commend 는 칭찬하다 라는 뜻입니다) them to bite something, they follow my order. Of course, this situation can be by training. Moreover, sometimes they can understand other people’s emotions such as hate or like. If some person people hate them, they avoid that person. This example shows that pets can feel other people’s emotions and languages, so they are respected other people.
Second, people can be solved solve their emotional stress like loneliness by through pets. In the modern society, marriage age is later than past before, and they are felt lone emotion by living alone longer time (??) thus they feel lonelier for a longer time (이런 말씀을 하시고 싶으신건지…). For example, I lived alone for 10 years, so I sometimes thought that I was loneliness. One day, I bought a cat to solve my emotional stress when I bought cat for solve my emotion stress, I had to take care of my cat, and my pet followed me as well. I spent lots of my free time with my cat, and I could forget the negative emotions like I was loneliness. This example shows that people can forget negative thinking such as loneliness and sadness when people are with pets.
In brief, pets can be understood understand other peoples thoughts and thinking or their emotions by their facial appearance or behaviour, and people can be solve their negative emotional stress through to supporting their pets. Finally, I strongly believe that people should respect their pets like as family members.