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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :No more paper book will be produced after 20 years... | |
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There are still many people who claim that they can`t concentrate on reading except character if the text is not on the paper. Although I agree with that people are used to paper books rather than digital ones, I think paper will be disappeared in the world because of the development developing of internet and science.
No needed paper world The world without paper has is already has come to us. These days, when I want to read classical old literature, I access to google, and I search the name of the literature, then I can read it. This process is so convenient. that I don`t have to go to the library museum to read a paper one.
In this world, however, paper is still a very important material yet. This is because the place where people can access to the internet is still limited yet, and an electric book`s size and weight is still heavier than a book. The electric book`s much higher cost than the book is also problem. In spite of that, the reason I agree with that paper will be diappeared in 20 years is that development of science will naturally solve the problems. As the science is developed, the electric book's cost which is very fancy now will be get down, and it will be a basic item of the human life. In addition, their size will be getting smaller and smaller too. The zone that we can access to internet will also spreads all over the world.
To sum up, I think the paper will be disapeared in 20 years, beacause that they will pushed out of the world by more convenient stuffs such as the union of internet, computer and electric book.
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