Some people believe that students having have one long vacation for each year is better for their efficient time management complete relaxation. and concentrating on the rest. However, students having have several short vacations throughout the year is better for maintaining students study pattern and letting them spend spent time more deliberately for the several following reasons.
To begin with, having several short vacations throughout the year allows students use their time effectively. If the vacation is short, students will make a plan carefully in order to have a meaningful break. For instance, since due to the short amount of time, students have to more concentrate more on their plan to stick to it(계획을 고수하다,지키다) master. In my case, I had a plan planned to learn a swimming in short spring break, and I did had to do my best on class to master freestyle. After the short spring break, I felt a sense of accomplishment and I was able to make a plan for next break deliberately.
Furthermore, having one long vacation makes students hard to adjust to next semester. As a student, the most important duty is study hard and an appropriate break makes students more cheerful for their next semester, on the other hand, excessive long breaks can harm on their study patterns. Because, some students do does not know that how to spend time effectively on their precious vacation or they can be lazy easily. They can easily become lazy during the vacation since some students do not know how to spend time effectively. As a result, long vacation breaks students’ study patterns and they students will need more time to adapt to their study at the beginning of semester. Thus, having one long vacation is an inefficient system for students.
As mentioned above, having one long vacation causes students to become idle (=lazy)being lazy and ruin their study pattern. On the other hand, several short vacations throughout the year vitalize on student’s life and is meaningful. have a meaningful break. Thus, I firmly believe that several short vacations throughout the year are more beneficial system for students.
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