■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic : Why do you think people attend college or university? | |
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▶ Your Answer :
People attend college or university for many different reasons. I think the most important advantages of attending colleges are new experiences and career preparation, that is, people can experience various activities in colleges, and they can have opportunities to get more desirable career through college education.
First of all, people can experience various activities. This is mainly because college and university provide students with extracurricular programs and events. To illustrate my friend, there was a festival of the university that she attends. During the festival period, she was able to make many new friends who are interested in very different areas and experience a variety of cultures from the game and the food made by foreign students. If it had not been for the festival of her university, she had not been likely to have chances to experience the various things. As this case illustrates, college or university plays a beneficial role in getting new experiences.
In addition, people can prepare their future job in college or university. This is mainly because college and university offer students lots of programs like internships as well as the information regarding their future job they want to get. For example, my sister had had an internship opportunity thanks to her college and she was employed by the company. The internship experience given by her college helps to find her job more easily. As this case illustrates, a lot of information and programs college or university offers enable students to get their job after their graduation.
In conclusion, I believe that the most important reasons of attending universties are new experiences and career preparation. This is because people go through a variety of activities in universities, and because college students can have chances to get their desirable future jobs. | |
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