■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Some people prefer to live in places that have the same weather or climate all year long. Others like to live in areas where the weather changes several times a year. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
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Some people want to live where the weather is the same all year long. Others like to live where it changes periodically in a year. In my opinion, I would like to live in areas which have many seasons. Thanks to chaning weather, there are various outdoor activities and seasonal foods.
First, people can enjoy various outdoor activities who live in an area which has many seasons. For example, my country, South Korea, locates at the latitude which makes four seasons; spring, summer, fall and winter. I can enjoy summer sport and also winter sport, such as skiing and skating. As a result, my country has many resort complex both in the coast of the sea and at the high mountain which is for skii. Especially, I love to play those sports. Every summer I go to the beach with my friends. Swimming and windsurfing are the favorite activities which we can enjoy in summer. After summer vacations, I begin to collect money for winter trip to ski resort. Those who love various outdoor activities like me enjoy the changing weather. And we also expect the every next season.
Second, people can enjoy many seasonal foods who live in an area which has many seasons. The enviroment of changing the weather makes people develop the recipe of foods for each season. In summer of my country, people eat Samgae-Tang, which is made of chicken, for health care in hot weather. And also, there are ice creams and fresh fruites for overcoming the hot weather. On the other hand, people eat sweet potatos which are burned by fires in winter. It is one of the famous winter foods in my country. When it is very cold, it makes our body warm. As a reult of four seasons, Korea, my country, has various seasonal foods and it is nice of those who seek to experience the diversity of foods.
In brief, I love to live in the place where the weather changes in a year, especially has many seasons. Because I can enjoy various outdoor activities and seasonal foods. I prefer those to the place where it has the same weather all year long. | |
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