We all need to have a job to earn enough money to eke out their our livings.Having better jobs and , working in high standard company gives more salary to the workers.To have a better job jobs, We all need to have better skills and more abundant knowledge than others to get hired./to be more competitive into the job. These knowledge and skills can be obtained when we are teenagers . Therefore, I strongly disagree that it is acceptable for teenagers to work while they are students. are in the stage of school life where we learn and gain knowledges so I disagree that in some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students.
First of all, the main role of teenagers is studying.Teenagers are in the stage of education. educational life.They should always go to school and learn from their teachers, and after school, they might go to educational institutions to gain extra knowledge and to learn better.The main purpose is simple.It is just to succeed.OR to lead a better life. People have to succeed and get better job so that he or she can earn a lot of moneyto live in rich life.People need to be successful and have satisfactory jobs in order to live in affluence. There are thousands of people who apply for the same job and to win the competition, one should be superior to others.So if teenagers are disturbed in studies due to working in their jobs, they can't concerntrate on their studies and then they will be behind their peers at school.Having not learnt enough, they will have many difficulties to get good jobs and be successful person.
Second, If the teenagers are busy in studies and working, they won't have any time for to learn extra curricular activities.(방과후활동은 배우는게 아니잖아요 ^^) Teenagers also should consider this learn them.These days even universities require from applicants which extra curricular activities in order to understand them better. they learnt and know deeply. It shows that the teenagers have to study hard as well as do learn extra curricular activities. So teenagers should not waste their time on their working and but have to gain their plentiful knowledge and have to participate in learn various extra curricular activities.
In conclusion, people can have a job and work after their graduation from the high school.
I think it is better not to have a job during teenager teenage life and but concerntrate on the studies and gaining knowledges. |