People believe that learning from those in higher levels is more a faster way to reach their goal than learning from those in same levels. However, learning from those in higher level causes negative influence on their study. Thus, I agree with this statement with the several following reasons. (이렇게 쓰시지말고 그 2가지 이유를 서론에 쓰는게 좋다고 들었어요)
First of all, well-established?? in their learning is the most important part for the next step. In everything, these are several steps for mater it and it is necessary to build a solid foundation from the beginning in order to be skillful in a certain field. For example, think of a baby. babies cannot walk without before step crawling. If the babies will tries to walk without learning how to crawl, they could get hurt by falling. As a result, it brings about more negative effects without basic steps, and taking a step-by-step is the most efficient method for mater their goal. Likewise, without fundamental knowledge ,people could encounter many problems while studying..
Secondly, learning from those in higher levels makes students become easily tired in their study. The higher leveled have no idea why beginners make various mistakes. In addition, without sense of achievement, students who are in beginner levels get easily frustrated and get less motivated. And it is also hard for teachers to teach basic knowledge only for students who lack basic knowledge. This is time-consuming since students have to go back to their right level and study again.
Finally, as I have mentioned above, The best way to motivate students is to help them to achieve their goal. and Also earning in same level is the most efficient way to master their goal. Thus, I agree with the statement which states that learning from those in the same level is better than learning from those in higher levels.
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