■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Studying abroad is not as good as studying in mother country | |
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In the global world, many students tend to study abroad and they think that studying abroad is advantageous to get useful academic experience. Of course it brings about a great deal of merits but I believe that its disadvantages outweigh advantages. This is due to the fact that it takes a lot of money and time.
First of all, studying abroad costs a lot. People should expend money for flight tickets, tuition, dormitory fee and so on. I think that it better to spend the money in mother country. People can sufficiently use diverse utilities that help their study such as institutions and language schools in their hometown. In addition, studying in home country is more effective because there is no barriers in language and culture. Students can be absorbed in studying easily. According to a survey, most student studying abroad agree that studying in home country has many more advantages and, as it is, they regret their choice. Major reason they regret is expensive cost and they have felt burdensome of expense at least once or twice.
Not only that, students might squander their time while they are accustomed to the circumstance. When they arrive at unfamiliar country, they are mostly confused. This sometimes gives rise to homesickness. In order for students to be accustomed to the environment, time is required. Students need to make new friends and be familiar with the geography. Time is wasted on those periods. To give you a idea, here is an example. When I went to the USA to study abroad, I had to spare my time to make friends and learn about the country. It was a precious experience but it actually had nothing to do with studying.
Therefore, if students want to study efficiently, studying in mother country is more wise. Studying abroad can provide unforgettable experiences but it really costs a lot and students might throw few times away. | |
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