It has been suggested by some people whether it is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. There lies some truth in saying that growing up in a rural area provides an easy-going life pattern to children; nevertheless, in my opinion, I believe that growing up in a big city can provide various benefits toward childrens' future careers. In this essay, I will present briefly two reasons to support my opinion.
Most of all, growing up in a large city is important for children’s intellectual development since there are various specialized schools and better health care systems. To illustrate, most important institutions are concentrated in a big city. This is because they have more people coming in from the rural area, and often, parents’ primary purpose is to educate their children. On the contrary, those who dwelling in the countryside often confronts with limited education and is likely to get a small range of knowledge. In addition, various health care systems are mostly centered in a big city in that many people reside there. Naturally, with the emergence of specialized hospitals in a big city, individuals can take their sick children to their closet hospitals as soon as possible. In this regard, diverse school programs and specialized hospitals are necessary for children’s education.
Moreover, living in a large city also helps children to have longer preparation time for their future. Specifically, those living in a rural area are often prone to have limited opportunities to see wider range of job opportunities. This is because since most cities are concentrated with industrial, commercial, government and financial institutions, most parents desire to move into a city for the best for their children. In this sense, children are able to gain more career opportunities than in the countryside. Furthermore, growing up in a large city makes children to see people with diverse career, ethnicity, and different cultural backgrounds. Since most people are located in the captial of a country, there are varios kinds of people. In this regard, living in a big city offers various job opportunties.
I strongly agree with the statement that it is beneficial for children to be raised in the city rather than in a big city on account of reasons I have mentioned above: Not only the city has the greatest specialized schools and best health care, but it also has various institutions that provide myriads of job opportunities to future generation.
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