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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Q. You have enough money to purchase either a house of a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice. | |
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There are several valuable things in people's lives needed to live; food, house and other things. And in modern society, it is becoming more necessary requirements than the before.
Compared with a house and a business to buy, I will purchase a house to live in. Housing is one of the most important things to people living in these days. It provides a place for us to rest and relax, keeping us safe from any weather condition such as rainfall or storm. From my experience, I have lived in small room of an apartment ,called "gositell", in order to commute my former company and this made me feel so distressed. I had to be very nervous and sensitive to the person who live next door. Moreover, it was too small to live a life. So I had to place the minimum products for living. I felt really tough time at that time.
Not only that, the price of houses have became increased more and more. By newspapers and television, it is reported that prices of apartments in Gangnam, Seoul have increased surprisingly 7 times more for 10 years. It shows that investments for housing is the best way for me to save and make profits rather than saving money into banks. The more people want to buy their own houses, the higher the price of apartments increases. As it might expect that owning houses is much more beneficial than purchasing a business.
To sum up, owning houses is more profitable and it can offers a place where I relax and feel comfortable, Housing is necessarily needed to all the people and it gives basements to stand their own lives. All things considered, if I have options to choose which I could purchase either a house or a business, I would buy a house for my family to live in. | |
There are several valuable things in people's lives needed in order to live; food, house and other things. And in modern society, it is becoming more necessary requirements than the before.
Compared with a house and a business to buy, I will purchase a house to live in. Housing is one of the most important things to people living in these days. It provides a place for us to rest and relax, keeping us safe from any weather condition such as rainfall or storm. From my experience, I have lived in small room of an apartment, called "gositel", in order to commute to my former company and this made me feel so distressed. I had to be very nervous and sensitive to the person who lived next door. Moreover, it was too small to live in a life. So I had to place the minimum products for living. I felt really tough time at that time. I had a really tough time back then. (고시텔은 한국사람들만 아는 단어자너용~이렇게 쓰시면 검사하는 사람들 중 아무도 못 알아 들을꺼에요.)
Not only that, but the price of houses have became increased more and more. By newspapers and television, it is reported that prices of apartments in Gangnam, Seoul have increased surprisingly 7 times more for 10 years. It shows that investments for housing is the best way for me to save and make profits rather than saving money into banks. The more people want to buy their own houses, the higher the price of apartment’s increases. As it might expect that owning houses is much more beneficial than purchasing a business. (여기서도 강남이라 서울이라고 하시지 마시고 한국이라고 쓰시는게 더 알아듣기 쉬울 것 같아요~ 서울사는 저희들에게는 이 이슈가 피부에 와닿지만 외국인들은 그렇지 않으니깐요)
To sum up, owning houses is more profitable and it can offer a place where I can relax and feel comfortable, Housing is necessarily needed to all the people for everybody and it gives basements to stand their own lives(이것도 아주살~짝 한국스러운 생각인게요~왜냐면 외국에서는 고등학교를 졸업하거나 19살이 되면 거희다~부모님이랑 안살자너요~저는 해외고 나왔는데요 제 친구중에 아직도 부모님이랑 사는 애 한명도 없습니다.). All things considered, if I have options to choose which between I could purchasing either a house or a business, I would buy a house for my family to live in.