Some people believe that students should be given one long vacation each year. I agree with this opinion for two reasons. First, students can travel many countries during long vacation. Second, taking long vacation can make students more creative.
Most of all, long vacation is a good opportunity that can to travel some cities and countries where students cannot never would be go during a semester. Some people may say that traveling other countries have some difficulties. However, it is very important to broaden students' sights. Let me take my experience for example. When I was in high school, I had a hard time studying to enter a decent college in my community, Seoul, Korea. Naturally, I always used to stay up all night for mid-term and final exams, so I could never be relaxed. Some of my friends even went to abroad where to an English speaking country to improve their English abilities. I almost had a heart attack because I had to study a lot of text books and tremendous assignments. :이부분은 생략하셔도 될듯 .. Fortunately, my parents got free tour tickets. tour free-tickets. My family could go to Japan for a week. I was able to see many scenes that I have learned about Japanese environments and talk to some local people. Casually, I dropped by a library in Tokyo by chance. Amazingly, there are were many students who were debating debated over their political situations and studied hard in English. Eventually, I realized that I must study more to accomplish my dream. In this sense, students should be given one long vacation to broaden their sights.
Furthermore, long vacation can make students more creative. Some people mention that students only will only play games during long vacation. However, students can get many opportunities to develop their creativities. My brother can be an example. My brother is a college student dreaming to be a famous artist. Unfortunately, he had to do a part time job to collect some money as he wanted to go to Paris to learn about his interests. Besides, he had to study and do some group assignments in his college during vacation. : 이부분도 약간 간추려서 쓰시면 좋을것같아요 Eventually, He took his semester off for leaving to Paris. After six months, when he came back home, he has changed. He told me that he could feel many things by living in another city. He started to win some fashion contests and even interview with famous TV programs. He said that he could improve his proficiency about differently thinking differently by meeting and taking with many people who came from another other countries. This shows that long vacation can present impressive opportunities to students.
In conclusion, students should be given one long vacation each year for the reasons that I have mentioned above.
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