▶ Your Answer : The
reading's author argues that anthropologists have been trying to decide
accurately what the cause of this fast disintegration was, and they have come
up with some satisfactory explanations. The lecturer contradicts the reading
passage that there are not accurate evidence.
First of all, the author argues that Hohokam people were forced to
move because of devastating floods in the region. By analyzing tree rings, researchers have decided that the region
experienced serious flooding before the disappearance of the Hohokam. The lecturer refutes the opinion that
although it is true that they suffered devastating floods, they could repair
their region.
In
addition, the author contends that their society collapsed as a result of a
deadly epidemic because European explores arrived in South America, they
brought foreign diseases to America. The lecturer rebuffs the reading passage's
assertion that European explores and Hohokam are not related to epidemic
because time is not connected.
Final point made by the author is that Hohokam civilization
disintegrated due to internal conflict. Their leader was weakened by overpopulation and food shortage and oral
histories of the Pima Indians teach that the Hohokam people revolted against
their leaders. The lecturer
casts doubt on the reading which states that there are not convincing evidence
that they had leader. Also, oral histories from Pima Indians do not reliable
information.
점수: 27 지적할 부분이 없는 통합형 에세이입니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것은 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 정보를 가지고 있는 리딩과 리스닝이 어떻게 비교하고 반박하는 지를 보여주는 것 입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우는 리딩이나 리스닝 둘 다 서로 구체적으로 주제에 대하여서 잘 반박하는 거 같습니다. 잘 서술하였습니다. 수고많으셨습니다. |