▶ Your Answer :
Undoubtedly,
money plays a significant role in people’s daily lives where they work or play.
Some people think that famous athletes and entertainers deserve a large
amount of money, while others do not. Both sides may have their own reasons to
support their ideas. If I were asked to choose one, I would say that it is
desirable to get a large amount of money for famous athletes and
entertainers.
To begin with,
when famous athletes and entertainers receive the large amount of money, it
motives them to do better in their field. This is because they can buy the
luxury items such as luxurious watches and sports cars and help their families by
purchasing the necessities of life like clothes and food, if they get a lot of salary.
For these reasons, their life will become happier. For example, my oldest friend,
John, (컴마는 앞뒤로 써주세요) has been a baseball player since high school. He has high potential but
used to rarely try to his best due to the low financial reward from high
school. It could not make him try harder. However, once he made the contract
with the professional baseball team, he started to take a great amount of money.
When he received the first salary from the team, he bought his parents the
inner clothes and took them out for dinner. Also, he bought a new sports car
and drove it with his friends. He felt satisfaction from his parents’ happy
face and free time with the sports car. It led him to endeavor the baseball practice
harder. He became passionate with the baseball. He knew that he could get more
salaries, if he made a better performance in the baseball game. (연결어를 넣어주세요) Thus he has practiced
diligently everyday, and did personal training after the dinner. Thanks to his
effort, he could show the best performance in his team, and be rewarded with the
highest salary among his team members.
I strongly
believe that the advantages of receiving the high salary for famous athletes
and entertainers far outweigh the disadvantages for the reasons I have
mentioned above. All in all, the importance of the money cannot be
underestimated (반대의 의미) in life. |