■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic : some people like to buy clothes online, while other people choose the try on clothes themselves at a mall. Which do you prefer and why? |
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▶ Your Answer : Various opinions may exist over the argument that shopping online is better than at a mall. With respect to this topic, many people are liable to think that choosing clothes in person gives several options to make a decision more wisely. However, from another point of view, picking stuffs up on (인터넷 쇼핑에 pick up이 자연스러운지 의문이 듭니다. ordering 등이 적절할 것 같습니다.) the internet could be more likely to have the bulk of advantages in many ways. I also have the same idea on the matter for the subsequent reasons. To begin with, thorough the internet, people are capable of comparing the attributes of clothes they want to buy. (TC가 그냥 가격이 더 싸다 라는 식이 더 좋을 거 같습니다) There are millions of web-sites selling similar kind of stuffs, and their prices and qualities are different respectively. Therefore, these web-sites help us size up many clothes easily. To explain this, I will illustrate my experience as an example. When I was a college student, I went downtown in an attempt to get brand-new shoes I had been longing for. There was a shop to sell that item, and I bought it right off. After paying for it, I searched the internet, and unintentionally found the same thing which had lower price than I had bought at the mall. I regretted that I bought the shoes at the mall swiftly, but that choice was not reversible. On top of that, internet shopping provides us with convenience and easiness to access the items. Provided that we just click the items we want to buy and pay for it online, the products will be arrived in just two or three days. This system will be able to give us a chance to spend the time doing something else instead of going shopping centers. This merit is also proven by the poll conducted by the Ministry of Welfare with 1000 university students as respondents. The purpose of this survey was to ascertain the main route they used when they shopped. An overwhelming 80 percent of the students had responded that they had used online shopping. The reason was that they felt so comfortable to buy something through internet. According to the result of the survey, the handiness encouraged the students to buy clothes online, and this corroborates the aforementioned idea. In a nutshell, it hardly comes to the convincing conclusion everyone agrees with. (문장부호 - 온점) Nevertheless, taking the two reasons described above into consideration, it is clear-cut that getting clothes online seems like a more appropriate method that can satisfy us.
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