After the twentieth century, we experience and fell cultural, mental, technological, and physical changes. In my opinion, a computer occur and developing the internet technology is the most extinguishable change which we should remember. Introducing a computer and then developing the internet perfectly change our all life. After both a computer and the internet are introduced and developed, we can see, feel, listen, and meet everything which is in the whole world. And Before they are appeared, our life is limited to a certain degree. However, after the advent of a computer and the internet, our life's limit disappeared.
An important developments such as a computer and the internet in the twentieth century gave people a considerable number of chances to meet, see, and experience everything from family who live together to animals, plants, buildings, and other people who live in a region which we did not go and listen. In my case, when I was in tenth grade, I saw a science book which was about the universe. After I saw terms such as the universe, Mars, Sun, and Moon, I had a number of questions such as their appearance, and
size, whether or not people live in the planet. However, books and teachers could only talk numbers about their size and a fact that there are not people. I did not be satisfied. Fortunately, through the Internet, I could see their appearances, and movements, and know the reason that people can not live in the planet. These facts stimulate my imaginative power and my desire to study about science.
Another change by two inventions is boundary of our life, knowledge, experience and activity is destroyed. Before the two inventions are invented, our everything's boundary is limited to a certain range. However, the most important inventions in the modern times destroy every boundaries that people have felt. In my opinion, among a number of changes, the best example is that knowledge's boundary and users' range are destroyed. A computer and the internet allow people to obtain unlimited knowledge and informations. And not only academical people but also the public can obtain informations which they want to know. As a result, all people can have a chance to study.
In conclusion, among a number of inventions in the twentieth century, in my opinion, a computer and the internet is the most important inventions. The reasons are that they contribute to broaden our knowledge and destroy every boundary. Through rightly using a computer and the internet, our life can be
better.
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