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It is controversial that to choose a best method among the three options, working alone or working with classmates or working with a tutor, to make a best performance for a project. Someone says that working alone is beneficial since people do not have to care about others' schedule and working with classmates gives much more chance to share a lot of idea for a project. However, I firmly believe that working with a tutor gives countless advantages for a project and I definitely choose a tutor for the outstanding result from that.
First of all, by working with a tutor gives people could get direct and fast solutions for the project because a tutor already has useful experiences from a variety of projects. (Which projects are they?) In addition, tutors have an insight of on the reason why the project are given to the students. (Clarify the meaning) Thus they know what types of the lessons students can get after finishing the project. In other words, I am able to get direct and highlighted advices from tutors. However, students who work alone and who work with their classmates will not have such a chance to understand the real meaning of projects before its end.
Second, for work efficiency we should work with tutors. To be more specific, students who work with tutors do not have to waste their time on for caring about the others. When it comes to group project, it is inevitable to consider ther others and it is quite a waste of time wasting activity. For instance, when I was in college there were a great deal of group based projects. It During the activity I could not take my own time to think over the best solution. Thus there was nothing for me to learn something new. Even worse, if someone works alone, it is catastroph because they cannot get any advice or shortcut for the effective way to finish the project.
In conclusion, if I have to choose a option for a project which is hugely important one, I undoubtedly pick a tutor since she or he has useful experiences enough to coach me and with her or him I do not have to waste my time to care the other members or vagueness due to without feedback.
채점기준표 | Grammar | Contents | Example | Coherence | 점수 | 2 | 2
| 2 | 2 | Score | Limited 10-17 |
- 스펠링 오류가 많은 편이므로 글을 마무리하실 때에 다시 한 번 더 꼭 체크해주시기 바랍니다.
- by -ing 로 행하실 때에는 주체가 언급이 되어야 합니다.
- tutor에게 얻을 수 있는 도움들을 돌려서 언급하기 보다는 자세하고 상세하게 예를 들어서 제시해주시는 것이 좋습니다. - 의미를 분명히 제시해주셔야 합니다.
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