■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic :whether dinosaurs are endotherms |
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▶ Your Answer : The reading passage asserts that dinosaurs are endotherms. However, speaker refutes it by starting that dinosaurs are not (줄임말 사용을 지양해주세요.) endotherms.
To begin with, the reading passage says that the polar region was the place where the fossils of the dinosaurs were found, which means even in cold climates they were able to sustain their body temperature. This completely contradicts one of the points (one of the + 복수명사 형태입니다.) in the speaker's lecture that the temperature of the polar region now is much lower than before. Therefore, this can prove that even the non-endotherms were able to survive there. Additionally, endotherms could have hibernated or moved to warmer places.
Second, the reading passage mentions that the position of the legs of the dinosaurs is (주어 동사 불일치 / of 가 너무 자주 쓰이고 있습니다!) underneath. This results them to be capable of (철자 오류) maintaining physical activities. This is opposite to (올바른 전치사) the speaker that there is no relationship between endothermy and the position of the legs. It rather causes (주어 동사 불일치) more weight and makes it non-endotherm.
Lastly, the passage disagrees with the speaker that having Haversian canals is also an essential factor. Haversian canals spur the dinosaurs to grow quicker. Nevertheless, speaker claims that dinosaurs have growth rings with them too. This makes the bones thicker and refrain the dinosaurs from growing. (refrain 명사 + from 동사 ing 형태입니다!)
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