■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic : Replacing fossil fuels |
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▶ Your Answer : The reading passage explains positive aspects of replacing fossil fuels while the lecture disagrees with the reading passage. First, the reading says that biofuels can replace fossil fuels. For example, corn based ethanol would cut greenhouse gas emission by 52% compared to gasoline. But the speaker strongly refute this. She says there are 60% of people who do not get enough food in our planet. So if we use corn to make biofuels, that would make more hunger. Additionally (대소문자), we do not have enough land to grow corn to make biofuels.
Second, the reading says that hydrogen can replace fossil fuels, because only byproduct of burning hydrogen are heat and water. Also we can find hydrogen everywhere, so it can be shared energy. However, the lecture rebut this because using hydrogen needs totally new power greed. So we should build new energy greed to use hydrogen.
Third, the reading makes a point that the sun power can replace fossil fuels. The sun power provides enough power to use. Also it is free source and no need for (전치사) new electrical grid. The professor disagrees with that because it is impossible to cover total surface area of planet. Moreover, we do not have enough resource to make that much solar panels.
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1. 각 문단 시작 전에 tab 버튼 눌러서 들여쓰기 해주세요.
2. introduction의 분량을 3문장 이상으로 늘려주세요.
3. body paragraph의 분량이 너무 짧습니다.
주어진 자료를 최대한 활용해서 많은 문장을 써주시는데 집중해주세요.
수고하셨습니다. *^^*