▶ Your Answer : Many people are liable to think that young people can be affected by their friend the most. However, in my opinion, The influences given by their mates are not that much as we think for the following two subsequent reasons. teenager do not bring impact on people for the following two subsequent reasons (대문자는 문장 시작할 때만 서술하시길 바랍니다) ( To begin with, parents have great effects on their children. Ever since they first met, they have spent a lot of time and have shared the emotions. young people often imitate their parent's behavior and accents. where most likely, children could follow the behavior of parents This influences are too enormous to be compared with the effects from friends. For example there is a poll conducted by The Korean Board of Education with 500 adolescent as respondents. The purpose of this survey was to understand who the most influential model the students think. An overwhelming 90% of respondents had claimed that their parents have an influence on them the most. This was because adolescent Adolescent (this is because는 적절한 표현이 아닙니다) spend a large amount of time living in their house with parents and also consulted by parents about their career path and personal problems. On the other hand, the respondents who had answered that their friend was the most influential person to them was only under 10%. On top of that, adolescents are largely affected by social medias. As an exposure to media is extended, the influences are growing at an alarming rate. It has been shown that there has been growing influence from media Since there are many entertainers and interesting information (information는 셀 수 없는 명사 입니다) in the media, young people want to follow and learn the trends and fashion easily. In these day, the influences will become more significant as new type of medias pops out. To explain this, I will illustrate my cousin's experience as an example. when my cousin was sixth grade students, I met him on Christmas day after a while. However, he did not come out and hang out with relatives, but he enjoyed social network services on the phone in his room all day. Moreover, his room was packed with stickers and photos of pop music stars. It was impressed for me that the media had changed him a lot and I realized how the influences of mass media was growing quickly. In a nutshell, There are many other identities that have an influence on young people besides friends. In this regard, I think that it tends to be too much to say that friend have the most significant effects on adolescents.
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