▶ Your Answer : In the reading passage, there is ample support for the author's claim that Estrucan's origin can be found in Turkish roots. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author's point.
First, the professor contends that it is highly doubtful to believe that DNA analysis as the evidence of Esturcan's origin is from Turkish. This is because DNA DNA (this is because는 적절한 표현이 아닙니다) is from thousands of years ago and it is probably degraded from many people who visited the archeological site. This casts doubt on the reading passage's claim that genetic markers which are analyzed from DNA at the Estrucan's gravesides show us that Estrucans are migrated from Turkey.
Next, the professor argues that it is not proven that there is a connection between Estrucan's text and the Turkish one. Sometimes, there is a similar alphabet among the different languages thus we cannot conclude that Estrucan's inscriptions have a connection with the Turkish alphabet. Probably, Estrucan's alphabet survived from a language family. This counters the reading passage's suggestion that investigation between Estrucan text and Turkish one found there are similarities and it shows us that the Estrucan alphabet is derived from Turkish one.
Finally, the professor insists that cremation practice cannot explain the connection between Estrucan and Turkish. Archaeologists found that cremation was practicing in northern Italy before Estrucans were around. This refutes the reading passage's assertion that Estrucan's funerary practice such as cremating and soring the ashes in sophisticated urns has similarities with Turk's funerary one.
점수: 22 리딩에 대한 정보가 많이 부족한 통합형 에세이입니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것은 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 정보를 가지고 있는 리딩과 리스닝이 어떻게 비교하고 반박을 하는 것인지를 보는 것 입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우에 있어서는 리딩에 대한 부분이 각 단락에서 한 문장으로만 서술하였는데. 한 문장으로 끝내는 것 보다는 리스닝을 좀 더 반박할 수 있는 부분들을 더 서술하시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다.
안녕하세요, 설탕선생님께서 첨삭때마다 문장사이에 엔터를 치지말라고 하던데 어느부분을 말씀하시는지 잘 모르겠습니다. 혹시 리스닝 요약한후 리딩요약할때 그 때 넘어갈때 엔터를 치지말라는 말씀이세용??? 항상 감사합니다 |