▶ Your Answer : Agree
Some
people think that making new friends is more beneficial than maintains your old
friends. However, in my opinions, getting along well with old friends is the
most crucial factor. If you have friends who have spend many years, you will be able to gain help and
save more time.
To
begin with, people who have old friends can acquire proper aids. The old
friends can give you a lot of beneficial advice since you have spent a lot of
time with them. So, the friends know your situation well. For example, when I was a high school student, my household circumstance was poor. So, I always lacked
money and anyone knew my situation. But, Minji Kim who was my high school friend
only understood my difficulties. She recommended me to work in a school library
which had been recruiting a part-time job worker. By getting advice from her, I
applied to a school library job and I could earn money and forget my worries and
problems.
On
top of that, making new friends wastes time. It acquires a significant amount
of time and effort since people usually don’t know each other when they first
meet. If you waste time making new friends, will time wait for you? The answer
will be no. in the world we live in, time is gold. Since we cannot turn time
back, we must focus on keeping a good relationship with your old friends. For
instance, when I went to a new sports meeting last year, I made a new friend, Jooyoung
Park in this meeting. As I spent a lot of time with him, I believed that I knew
a little about him but it was just my thought. I still haven’t known many
things about him. When I realized that, I was depressed and disappointed.
To
sum up, you can get more useful advice in your life by keeping a good
relationship with your old friends. Moreover, being familiar with new peers is
time wasting. In this regard, I firmly believe that getting along well with old
peers is more essential for the reasons I mentioned above.
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