■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic :Q) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
> Hasty decisions are never the right ones
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. |
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▶ Your Answer :
It is widely believed that hasty decisions mislead us into the wrong choices. While the lack of deep considerations before making decision may bring setbacks in life, however, timely decisions can be the right ones and required because of the several reasons as followings.
First of all, every human being has very special talent, intuition, and the first naive idea from our intuition often is the best among other options. For example, when I was about to graduate from the university, I did not have any specific plan for the outside of school. I just felt like if I continued to do research, it would be the best option. I decided to apply for graduate school, and continued to work as a researcher. By now, I am very happy with my job, and I think I am talented in carrying out scientific research. Upon my experience, I learned that an intuitive idea in hurry is better than decisions with much consideration, but delayed.
Also, in most of cases in our life, decisions should be made on time. Chances are not permanently waiting until we make the decision. Having too much consideration would have us miss the chances. For example, during the Korea War, most part of Korea peninsula was occupied by military operation from North Korea. The general MacAuthor who was in charge of controlling over the Amy of South Korea and United States alliance. He suddenly decided to conduct an Incheon Landing operation which was strongly opposed by many military experts at that time. However, he finally decided to operate the landing and successively reoccupied Korea peninsula territory. From this event, it is observable that a proper and timely decision could be the best solution in crisis.
To sum up, the intuitive and quick decisions sometimes bring benefit in our life. In this regard, I believe that hasty decisions can be the right ones. |
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1. conclusion의 분량을 3문장 이상으로 늘려주세요.
2. 첫 번째 바디 같은 경우는 친구의 예시를 들면서
오랜 시간 고민한 친구는 지금 나보다 더 안 좋은 상황이다
이런 얘기를 해주시면 좋을 것 같고
두 번째 같은 경우는 만약 단기간 내에 인천상륙작전을 수행하지 않았다면
어떻게 되었을지 -> 패전
이런 식으로 얘기를 더 풍성하게 만들어주세요.
수고하셨습니다. *^^*