■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : Being a leader is better than being a follower. |
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▶ Your Answer : There is a controversial issue regarding whether it is better to be a leader than a follower. Two different opinions exist in regard to this issue, but after taking into consideration of the idea from several perspectives, (완전한 문장 형태) I side with the idea that being a leader is better for two reasons. To start the argument, being a leader allows individuals to develop a sense of responsibility. This is due to the fact that being in charge of making decision is satisfying. Opponents to the idea may argue that being a follower is better, because it is less burden. However, I believe that being a leader helps improve multiple skills. A leader can determine the goal and visions of an organization. A research conducted by a renowned research center in Korea has (주어 동사 불일치) shown that people feel happier when they are in control than when following others. This research shows that leaders are satisfied with their lives. On top of that, being a leader gives a person the opportunity to learn valuable skills. This is because leaders learn how to organize and manage. My personal experience could be a great example. When I was a high school student, I developed confidence and responsibility working as president of a student association. I talked with president of school, and I solved a problem. By doing this, I can learn valuable skills. To conclude, I strongly believe that my standpoints of the two reasons are sufficiently convincing. The first is, being in charge of making decision is satisfying, and being a leader gives a person the opportunity to learn valuable skills. In this regard, I believe that being a leader is better. Opinions may differ from people to people, but what does not change is that this topic is something that needs to be addressed.
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1. 바디 문단이 전반적으로 많이 빈약한 편입니다.
두 번째 바디 같은 경우는 회장으로서 어떤 문제를 해결하였고
그 속에서 어떤 생각을 했고 무엇을 느꼈는지
보다 구체적으로 서술해주세요.
수고하셨습니다. *^^*