■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic :Do you
agree or disagree with the following statement? Today, people only do a few things
well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. |
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▶ Your Answer :Some people think that people should be
able to do various things well. However, in my opinion, people only do a few
things well nowadays. There are two reasons. First, people are too busy
working. Second, modern society requires specialists.
To begin with, people do not have enough
time because they are too busy. People nowadays (컴마 필요 없습니다) do not have spare time to
learn other things besides their work. Consequently, we have only time for refresh.
For example, I finish work at 10 every day. In the morning, I have to arrive at
my office until at 9 and I should deal with my tasks. Because the tasks take so
long time, I cannot often eat lunch. When I see the clock after finishing my
work, the clock points at 9 o’clock. Therefore, I only have time to rest.
On top of that, modern society calls (주어 동사 불일치) for
specialists. These days, it became more sophisticated (수동태입니다. 그리고 여기서 말하는 it은 무엇인가요?) than past. To become a
specialist, people need to devote to a single field. Take the example of my
friend who is a neurosurgeon now. He wanted to become a doctor. After he
graduated the undergraduate course, he decided to progress to advanced process
because being a doctor needs more study. Becoming a
neurosurgeon takes about 15 years of education and training. As you see,
modern society requires specialists.
To sum up, (대소문자 구분) people are too busy working and modern
society requires specialists. In this regard, I strongly believe that people
can do a few things well nowadays. |
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1. 각 문단 시작 전에 tab 버튼 눌러서 들여쓰기 해주세요.
2. conclusion의 분량을 3문장 이상으로 늘려주세요.
3. 첫 번째 예시에서는 해야 되는 태스크에는 구체적으로
어떤 것이 있는지 추가해주시면 좋을 것 같습니다.
그리고 두 번째 친구의 예시에서도 그 친구가 어떻게
다른 것에는 집중하지 않고 본인의 분야에서 활약했는지
자세하게 설명해주세요.
수고하셨습니다. *^^*