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How to raise a good child has been always a major interest among parents. Regarding this, some parents set strict rules for their children while others just let them free. Both sides of educational policies may all have pros and cos, I would like to encourage parents not to set strict rules for them.
First of all, we should let our children learn by themselves. As we all experienced, forcing to do tasks or strict intervention against one’s activities may lead to the lack of motivation. With such repeated regulation, they will eventually become very passive and inactive. In such status, we cannot expect a success in child’s life. Furthermore, the age of late 10s is very significant period for child to develop one’s ability to think. It is important for child to face trials and errors, and build a good personality. If we only push them to follow strict rules, such a good self-education cannot be achieved.
Also, we have many of other ways to achieve the same educational goal. For example, if parents keep playing with their children, they will naturally get to notice the socially accepted rules, common senses, and even law. Being a good exemplar is another nice method of education for child. They will see and follow what parents normally do. When I was younger, my father was always very passionate in his job. I have been watching him working over and over, learned how to achieve things to want. If he only did yield to do my job hard, I would not be realizing such a good lesson.
Teaching our child is always not easy task for every parent. However, one thing is clear that giving some level of free and spending much time with them is far better way than setting the strict rules.
For these reasons I mentioned above, I think setting strict rules is not good for parents who wish their children succeed in life.
우선 어휘 사용이 아주 좋은 편입니다 . 문장이나 어구에 어느 단어를 딱 표현할 만한 어휘가 뭔지 잘 알고 작성하신 듯 하여, 읽으면서 굉장히 좋았습니다. 주장도 straight forward하게 잘 작성해주셨고, 예시도 너무 좋습니다. (두번째 body에 parents와 baby 따라하는 것) 문법 오류도 조금 있으나, 이것들은 다 쓰고 복습 한번 하면 고쳐질 오류들로 보여 좋습니다.
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