Do you agree or disagree with the following
statement? Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive
effect on life in today’s world.
These days, the Internet is used for (올바른 전치사) many different purposes, such as finding information or using
social media to communicate. Recently, general awareness about whether the
widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world
has aroused heated arguments. This is an intriguing question because opinions concerning
this issue can be different depending on people’s perspectives. In my opinion,
however, I think that widespread use of the internet can help people to live
better in today’s world.
To begin with, by
using internet, people can find information in their interest very quickly. There
are many different kinds of information on the internet. However, they are so
well-organized that we can find the specific information by using some keywords.
This allows us to get information more quickly than ever. For example, when my
father was a university student, internet was not commonly used, unlike today. As
a result, when he needed to find information for his assignment, the (관사) only thing he
could do was to (to부정사) run to the library and search for the books related to it. This behavior
took so much time that he could barely sleep (조동사 + 동사원형) to finish his assignment. However,
as world changes, people can use internet more commonly than before. Now he can
get information by simply moving his fingers. This demonstrates that internet can
make people save their precious time.
Secondly,
internet allows people to interact with many other people who have different
cultural backgrounds. Talking with various people can help us broaden our
perspectives, which is a basic requirement of today’s world. As modern society
is becoming globalized, today’s world requires people with international views.
My brother’s experience is a compelling example of this. Few years ago, my
brother could get a chance to talk with people from foreign countries by using social
media. By having communication with them, he could broaden my view of cultures
which are fall different from my culture. Later, when he was having an interview to
get a job, interviewers got positive impression of him because they could
easily find that he has an international view of things happening in the world.
In
conclusion, I firmly believe that internet has a positive effect on our lives. This
is because it can save our time to find information and because it can broaden
our perspectives. Although there might be some minor negative effects of
internet that, internet has more positives effects that exceed the other minor flaws.
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1. 이유 두 가지는 모두 합리적으로 잘 작성된 것 같습니다.
사례도 적절하게 잘 쓰였습니다.
2. the Internet이 올바른 표기입니다! 참고해주세요
(internet이 틀린 것은 아닙니다)