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Some people think that going on a trip by oneself is better as people can save a lot of time and efforts. However, in my opinion, I believe that travel by taking a group tour with a guide is much more advantageous than the former. The reasons are that a guide can become a teacher during the on a tour and a preparation for travelling with other people takes less time than the travelling alone.
To begin with, if I do not have much knowledge about places to go, a guide could help us in many ways. As a guide has more traveling experiences about travel, they know many famous travel spots and tell tourists about their historical and artistic values as a teacher. For example, I visited Japan on a whim 3 years ago by myself. At first, I did not plan where to go, and what to see and even lost myself in a historical site. Finally, I got exhausted and regretted the lonely trip travel. However, fortunately, I happened to meet a Korean tourist traveling group with a guide and they admitted for gladly invited me to follow them. The guide led them to many hidden places, such as a deer park and ancient places in Tokyo and he explained places' values and anecdotes. I learned a variety of things that I could not experience without them.
On top of that, going on a trip in a group with a guide is more economical in terms of time and efforts needed to prepare the travel. If I take a travel alone, I have to plan it all by myself from scheduling to booking accommodations. In contrast, with other members, sharing the tasks could be possible, which reduces much time. For instance, I was about to go to Europe alone last year. As traveling to Europe needs delicate schedules, I was so overwhelmed for preparing them. So I gave up going on a trip to Europe. However, after knowing my concerns listening to my hesitation, my friends asked for the trip suggested traveling together. Eventually, and 3 members took a part in a trip, so we made a reservation for flight, looking ed for the place where to sleep, and searched for places to go respectively. Also, a guide gave some advice when it comes to the country’s culture and appropriate behavior, which was useful during travel.
To sum up, taking the possibility of more various experiences in a trip and consuming less time and effort into account, I hold that trip with a group and a guide makes the trip enriched. In this regard, it is important for people to go with other people and a guide.
채점기준표 | Grammar | Contents | Example | Coherence | 점수 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 3 | Score | Fair 18-23 |
- 첫 번째 내용에서의 '투어경험이 많은 가이드로 부터 도움이 된다'는 설득력이 높은 편입니다.
- 두 번째 내용에서 guide가 직접적으로 tour에 참여하는 부분이 적은 것으로 보입니다. |
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