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The reading passage contends that the reasons for the whale strandings can be fully explained by three theories. On the other hand, the lecturer brings up several points that contradict this argument.
First, the reading passage contends that wind patterns cause the whale strandings. However, the lecturer rebuts the reading passage's assertion by saying that it cannot explain the whale strandings that happen in places which have diverse wind patterns. For instance, the east coast of Unite State has wind patterns from the west which create the currents that make the whales flow away from land.
Second, the reading passage states that illness is the cause of whale strandings. However, the lecturer thinks that it is not enough to prove it. This is because it cannot account for the fact that healthy whales are stranded. To be specific, most whales are so healthy that they can swim back to the sea with their own abilities.
Third, the reading passage explains that geologic
features with gentle slopes disturb the sonar
system of whales and that this is the reason
Writing 0-30 Score Scale
Good (24-30)
Overall Comment:
매우 좋습니다! 포인트도 좋고 글의 전체적인 흐름도 전혀 어색하지가 않습니다. 살짝 아쉬운 점이 있다면 작은 문법 실수가 있습니다. 하지만 조금만 더 노력하시면 완벽한 글을 쓰실 수 있을 것 같습니다. 힘내세요!
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