First, people can bring up with intelligent bright ideas if they have longer time. As presentation also requires effective ideas and skills to fascinate the spectators with brilliant speech, I believe taking a longer time to think about the content thoroughly is necessary. (생각을 오래하면 더 좋은 아이디어가 나오나요? 좀 더 설명이 필요한 부분.) This will enable people to modify their presentation and enhance the quality of the presentation.
Next, there may be technical problems when proceeding the presentation if there is not enough time. This may deter the preparation for the presentation. For example, the computer may have problems just before the day of the presentation, and people may not be able to prepare for it. Nevertheless, if people start earlier, they will have more time to prepare for the presentation react to such unexpected accidents.
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