▶ Your Answer : Some people think that friends who have a lot in common is better than people who have many differences with you. However, in my opinion, having friends who are not like me is better because it gives me a chance to learn and also experience new things. I will explain with more details. First of all, there are so many things that I can learn from, especially people who are not like me. To be specific, people who are different from me usually have a different back ground, experiences, and also personality. So, I think they will have a different point of view, which means that I can have a broader perspective through understanding their ways to think. Also, you can be changed through their different examples and change your perspective. Second, it is more fun to spend time with people who are not like me. Like I said earlier, people who are different from me generally have different hobbies and things that they do. Therefore, it gives you more opportunities to experience new things. In my life, I was not the type of person who likes to go out and play sports. However, one of my friends, unlike me, really likes sports and he is outgoing. He helped me learn how to play basketball. and it was hard for me, but Even though it was difficult at the beginning, I started to get to know the joy of outdoor sports are fun like this. So now, I like to go out, play sports, and hang out with people. Were If the friend who is really different from me did not teach me this, I would not realize how fun it is to play basketball. To sum up, the more different the person you meet is from you, the more chances you will have to learn and enjoy. (내용 요약을 적어주세요) In this regard, I strongly believe that friends with a lot of differences with you is better than people who are like you.
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