Some people think that
moving to a new city or country is not a good idea because you will lose your
old friends. However, in my opinion, I don’t think moving to a new place is a
bad for our old relationships. This is because there are many ways to stay in
touch, (여기서 굳이 comma로 안 끊어주셔도 됩니다.) regardless of physical location, and it gives us
opportunities to make different types of friends.
To begin with, moving to
a different place doesn’t always result in losing a relationship. In fact,
people can stay connected with their friends by using numerous types of mobile
and online messengers. Even if we are in a different country, we can stay in
touch, as there are many mobile applications available regardless of the countries we live in.
(두 문단을 합쳐주세요.) For example, I have
moved to another city when I was 20. At that time, I only had friends in the
city where I used to live so I had worried about whether I could lose
losing my old friends. However, we could stay in
touch through text messages, online messengers and free phone calls. So we
couldn’t find any difficulties in maintaining our relationships.
On top of that, moving to
a different city actually gives us an opportunity to make different types of friends,
which can help us in broadening our
perspectives. By moving to a different environment, we can make friends who are
different from our old friends and we can learn a lot of new perspectives from
them. (마찬가지로 두 문단을 합쳐주세요) For example, my husband moved to Singapore 2 years ago. At first, he was
quite concerned about losing his old friends and making new friends. However,
as time passed, he could meet many new friends from his work, sports club and
neighborhood. Most importantly, he could make friends from completely different
backgrounds, which enabled him to learn various kinds of culture, industry and even
language. Now he is very satisfied with his new relationships.
To sum up, even if we move to a new city or country, we can maintain our
relationships with our old friends. Moreover, we can widen our knowledge, by
making new friends from different backgrounds.