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A long time ago, people didn’t have wide range of choice to in wearing clothes 보다는 in wearing을 쓰는 게 더 자연스럽습니다. 또한 목적어(clothes)를 넣어주셔야 합니다> because there were only typical and traditional types of dress. However, as world has been changed and interconnected, people in different countries have exchanged their products including cloths clothes so people could wear different clothes differently according to their tastes. <다르게 옷을 입는다 라고 표현하기 보다는 다른 옷을 입는다 라고 표현하는 게 더 정확한 것 같습니다 ^^> It is well shown that people in Asia can now wear blue jean which is originated from western countries. Under this circumstance, i I strongly believe that people can wear differently different clothes to show their characters and personalities.
약간 말이 복잡한 것 같습니다. 최대한 간단하게 써주세요~ ^^
Above all, how to wear dress is quite related with what people do for living which is one of essential factors reflecting their character or personality. People tend to choose their jobs according to their traits because jobs are the represent place where people stay in most of their time so they normally choose jobs considering their characters. After choosing job and starting work, people are apt to wear in accordance with what company expects with their employees to wear. <벌써 앞에 to wear가 들어갔기 때문에, 굳이 또 to wear를 넣을 필요는 없습니다> Therefore, if we know people’s jobs by watching how they wear, we could recognize what their personalities are. For example, I have a friend who is a singer. Therefore, whenever I met he meets new people, people they <앞에 people이라는 단어가 나왔기 때문에, 대명사로 바꿔주셔야 합니다> could easily know that he is open-minded person by his skinny blue jean and washing and loose t-shirt. It is proved that cloths clothes certainly show people’s job expressing and their characters.
직업과 성격에 관한 부분인데, 사실 하나만 토픽으로 사용해도 될 텐데, 두 개를 사용하니까 아이디어가 정확하게 전달이 안 되는 것 같네요. 그래서일까요? Supportive sentence 도 clear 하게 나타나지 못한 것 같습니다. 확인해주세요 ^^
In addition, how to dress can be make certain implication/impression to people about others when people meet first. (why do you think so?)Therefore, as one of strategy to express personality to strangers, people should wear what how they want to look like. After scanning how strangers wear, people tend to capture their images and assume what their characters are. In a recent research, how to wear cloths clothes is one of critical factors to be chosen by companies. The researchers interviewed personnel of human resources in various companies and most of them said they recognized interviewers’ characters by their cloths clothes. In instance, personnel of human resources tend to easily believe that interviewers who wear formal suit with stable color such as blue and grey have good personality as soon as they are showed within 30 seconds.
옷은 clothes 라고 합니다 ^^
To conclude, I think that how to wear is one of the effective ways to predict people’s character because it clearly shows their jobs closely related with their personality as well as reflect effectively their characters to others in the first time. Therefore, it is willingly recommended that people should wear nicely and suitably if they want to give good impression.
본인이 생각하시는 근거와 더불어 그를 support 해줄 수 있는 sentence 까지 clear 하게 제시하시는 연습을 하다보면 본인의 아이디어를 좀 깔끔하게 정리하실 수 있을 것이라 생각됩니다. 수고하셨습니다~! |